Saturday, April 24, 2010

angel without halo...



wen u r nt around
i just cry..i have wondered y?
den i realized,ma tears just comes out searching for u;
 
u r in my eyes,
i know u r scared of darkness,
thats y i keep my eyes open.
 
if time is an ocean,then
i would spend every drop for u;
if tym is a drop, den
i would spend every ocean for u;
 
wen am angry, u kno wt to do
u just smile, and
my anger loses d battle against it;
 
i wnt 2 spend a whole day wid u,
 i wish my lyf is just 1 day long;
 
if v can talk only during nights,
i wont bother my life being dark.
 
how can i say?
u r angel without a halo n wings or
an angel is u wid halo n wings
i guess d 2nd is better.

4 comments:

  1. truely amazing piece of poetry !! luved it !keep up the good work!

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  2. hey nice way of representing ur thoughts..donno if its true.!?
    at the end ur thoughts are alwez diplomatic or jocular..i think the former is correct.!! ;-)

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  3. @sunaina::welcome n thx for visiting;
    first of all its no where jocular...
    its a simply quixotic, lovey-dovey creation...
    so no way it can be diplomatic....

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  4. BICHISMITA SHASANIJuly 20, 2012 at 7:53 AM

    wonderful creation... loved the last 2 lines...

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