wen u r nt around
i just cry..i have wondered y?
den i realized,ma tears just comes out searching for u;
u r in my eyes,
i know u r scared of darkness,
thats y i keep my eyes open.
if time is an ocean,then
i would spend every drop for u;
if tym is a drop, den
i would spend every ocean for u;
wen am angry, u kno wt to do
u just smile, and
my anger loses d battle against it;
i wnt 2 spend a whole day wid u,
i wish my lyf is just 1 day long;
if v can talk only during nights,
i wont bother my life being dark.
how can i say?
u r angel without a halo n wings or
an angel is u wid halo n wings
i guess d 2nd is better.
truely amazing piece of poetry !! luved it !keep up the good work!
ReplyDeletehey nice way of representing ur thoughts..donno if its true.!?
ReplyDeleteat the end ur thoughts are alwez diplomatic or jocular..i think the former is correct.!! ;-)
@sunaina::welcome n thx for visiting;
ReplyDeletefirst of all its no where jocular...
its a simply quixotic, lovey-dovey creation...
so no way it can be diplomatic....
wonderful creation... loved the last 2 lines...
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